The storm looks over,
The river waiting to rise,
They accomplish, but scores perish!
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| Copyright: Uma-My musings |
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I've always been fascinated, yet wary of the Haiku form of poetry. This is my first ever attempt. Do let me know your frank opinions.
We can't win against nature! :)
ReplyDeleteThat's right :-)
Deletedon't looks like a first attempt ,wonderful haiku
ReplyDeleteWaih Prem Hai
Thank you for your kind words, cifar :-)
DeleteWonderful Uma. I am learning Haiku too and this is 'mast' I should say for first attempt.
ReplyDeleteCheers
That's encouraging to hear, Shanx..appreciate your saying this :-)
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