Flash floods #Haiku

The storm looks over,
The river waiting to rise,
They accomplish, but scores perish! 

Copyright: Uma-My musings
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I've always been fascinated, yet wary of the Haiku form of poetry. This is my first ever attempt. Do let me know your frank opinions. 

6 comments:

  1. don't looks like a first attempt ,wonderful haiku

    Waih Prem Hai

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    1. Thank you for your kind words, cifar :-)

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  2. Wonderful Uma. I am learning Haiku too and this is 'mast' I should say for first attempt.
    Cheers

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    1. That's encouraging to hear, Shanx..appreciate your saying this :-)

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