“Don’t move” growled the gangster, pointing a gun to Ria’s head.
A defense expert, she
kicked him hard and pulled the trigger twice; the code.
Within minutes several uniformed men surrounded the smuggling
den.
“Yet another successful undercover operation”, rejoiced Ria.
Word count:42
Very exciting! Good to know each other's cues in a situation like that.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kathy. Yep, lives are at stake here :-)
DeleteSee, I knew you could do it :D Well done on the prompt! And I love secret cues!
ReplyDeletephew! this prompt was tough..thanks, Shailaja! :-)
Deletesounds like a new show on USA NETWORK!
ReplyDeletegreat answer to the prompt, the signs were all there. :)
Thanks a lot, Kir..I'm glad for the signs too :-)
DeleteThis packed quite a punch! Good job.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the appreciation! :-)
DeleteVery good imagination....
ReplyDeletethank you, amma! :-)
DeleteImpressively complete story in 42 words!
ReplyDeletethanks for the kind appreciation, Silverleaf!
DeleteLove the spy-type stuff! You've done so much here with your 42!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you found this good, jetgirl!
DeleteGood one .. a full story in so less words amazing :)
ReplyDeleteBikram
Thanks a lot, Bikram. I'm glad to hear this :-)
DeleteVery cool that you told an entire story in such a short amount of time. It was very visual and suspenseful, too. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Jen for the lovely comment. I'm glad I was able to convey what I wanted to.
DeleteFun answer. Love that she kicked butt!
ReplyDeletethanks a lot, James!
DeleteWay to pack a whole story into only a few words!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for the appreciation, Saroful!
DeleteHOW COOL. I am imagining myself as Ria :P
ReplyDeleteLol, Red...I can totally imagine you being Ria :-)
DeleteGreat story in 42 words, Uma :) Love success :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Anita! yep, success feels euphoric, right?
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