Ramya had a new patient waiting for counseling; a mother
who had lost her child in an accident.
She looked deep into
her eyes. They looked very familiar.
A chill rose up Ramya’s spine as she remembered that fateful
day.
“Car runs over a toddler. Driver absconding”, reported the
papers.
Ramya was behind the
wheel.
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For the prompt 'She looked deep into her eyes' for marathon bloggers. This is a week long attempt at 55-ers.
#marathonbloggers #55wordfiction
Uma, that was brilliant! Never expected the twist :):)
ReplyDeletethanks a lot, Shailaja! :-)
DeleteGreat twist Uma !! Nice how you bring it about in such short stories.. reminiscent of O'Henry's short stories.
ReplyDeletethanks a lot, Shubha...I'm totally flattered :-)
DeleteOMG! Great twist!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it, Keirthana :-)
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