The make-up



She was hurt and cried bitterly. It was a mistake, he repeated. It was deliberate, she seemed to say. He was remorseful but knew what to do. 

He put his arms tenderly around her and kissed where it hurt her. Tears dried up magically, as she forgave her sibling at that instant of brotherly love. 


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My attempt for the 55 word fiction theme 'Love' for marathon bloggers. This is a week long attempt at 55-ers.

 #marathonbloggers #55wordfiction


13 comments:

  1. Awww so cute. I could picture it happening :)

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  2. How adorable :) nice take on the prompt :)

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  3. Hey that's a regular scene at our home.. unfortunately, apart from the kiss!! Too cute!

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    1. haha..am sure..:-)
      thanks, Tulika!

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  4. Awww.. sweet.. I thought the post was going to be about make-up..Thankfully , it wasn't :)

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    1. hahaha...far from that make-up..:-)

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  5. Nice twist to the topic Uma, I was wondering what it was about when I clicked on it :)

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  6. All is fair in love and war, especially with siblings, things are forgiven sooner. Such a cutely worded 55-er.

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