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The duel #55fiction #Drabbleweek

The nails made a deep scar on her back and she writhed in pain. Not to accept defeat, she turned around to give a resounding punch on the opponent’s cheek.

“How dare she snatch him from her?”

A gory battle ensued with the rivals clawing fiercely, wounding each other. 

All this for a dead rat! 


Word count: 55

Written in response to the day 5 prompt " claws" at the Drabble week for marathon bloggers.


  1. This is nice :-) I liked reading it!

    1. Glad you liked it, Divya..thanks :-)

  2. :) yes .. but food is precious :)


  3. Loved all the posts, but very intrigued by how do you get the apt picture for each post? :)

    1. hey Aparna..glad to have you back :-) and thanks a lot..a lot of googling goes in that, you see :-)

  4. Just for a dead rat??? That' really a cat fight! :)

    1. hehe, yes, Namrata and welcome here :-)

  5. Which is why it's called a cat fight. Nice, Uma.

    1. Yes, cats and women are so alike in this sense..thanks, Tulika :-)

  6. Ha ha ha :) A true cat fight :)


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