The Magician's Trick

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Magic;

Flames of orange

Burst beyond azure awning

Diffusing white fumes

Engulfed the muse in a swift embrace

A cacophony of sounds

Set the ambience; rousing

I looked on exhilarated

As the act played out

The muse metamorphosed

From night to day


17 comments:

  1. SoumyaJune 23, 2015 at 12:48 PM

    "The muse metamorphosed", oh wow what a beautiful line :)

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  2. UmaJune 23, 2015 at 2:46 PM

    Oh, thank you, Soumya!

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  3. Sid @ iwrotethose.comJune 23, 2015 at 7:43 PM

    Wow! I second Soumya. What a brilliant line that is!

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    1. UmaJune 24, 2015 at 11:49 AM

      Ha! Sid, coming from you, this means a lot! thanks so much :-)

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  4. Dr Roshan RadhakrishnanJune 23, 2015 at 8:03 PM

    Have to agree with the comments above... wonderful imagery. Was sitting here imagining it for a minute.

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    1. UmaJune 24, 2015 at 11:51 AM

      Now, I'm definitely getting heady with such comments. Thanks a lot, Roshan! It's good to have you at my space :-)

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  5. the little princessJune 24, 2015 at 2:29 PM

    What a wonderful visual treat! and great lines too!

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  6. RajlakshmiJune 24, 2015 at 5:23 PM

    felt like watching one of Dynamo's trick. Beautiful imagery. :D

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    1. UmaJune 25, 2015 at 11:37 AM

      Wow..thank you for the lovely comment, Rajlakshmi! <3

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  7. Whispering ThoughtsJune 25, 2015 at 12:05 AM

    Vivid description. Bright and brilliant

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    1. UmaJune 25, 2015 at 11:37 AM

      So glad you liked it, Ruby..thank you! :-)

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  8. UnknownJune 25, 2015 at 8:26 AM

    So vivid and poetic! Nicely done. ♥

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  9. chattywrenJune 26, 2015 at 10:49 AM

    Your way with words is something, Uma

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  10. AnonymousJune 26, 2015 at 8:15 PM

    It does seem like magic!

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  11. VinithaJuly 23, 2015 at 3:20 AM

    WOW Uma, what an imagery!

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