A pair of strong hands pushed him against a corner of the
damp cell, and he felt his lips bristle.
Stop!
Never hooked up before, huh?
Not with men.
There’s always a first time; you don’t think the snout came for free!
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Intriguing!
ReplyDelete"Not with men," told me a whole story! Great take.
ReplyDeleteI kind of imagined it all. :P
ReplyDeleteThis is scary. I can't imagine being locked up with violent people.
ReplyDeleteI figured "snout" meant something different than I imagined and was right when I googled! No free cigarettes in jail. Wow. Imaginative take on the prompt.
ReplyDeletewowski, intense! I had to google "snout", as well and am glad I did.
ReplyDeleteA little scary but all too real in prison culture. Nice take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteYou describe well the two characters here through their dialogue - the expectation of one and the uncertainty of the other.
ReplyDeleteGreat lingo. I could feel the tension.
ReplyDeleteGreat title for this dark and disturbing prison tale! I'm sure this happens...
ReplyDeleteImpressive, Uma! :)
ReplyDeleteExceptionally Good.
ReplyDeleteHappy Diwali.